There's a new post on Christian's blog, all about a trip to Hua Hin (no tea-and-cucumber-sandwiches with Smiles, apparently - he must be missing those now Ma and Pa Kettle are no longer around) and a Yes? No? Maybe? money boy. While not giving the ending away (but it wasn't really a happy one) I'd suggest to christian that his writing needs livening up. It was a struggle to work my way through. As a model of sexual encounters writing that encourages the reader to want more, might I suggest this recent article in New York magazine - https://www.thecut.com/2019/02/sex-d...-birthday.html